http://maypoles.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] maypoles.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] badbastion 2012-08-14 02:50 am (UTC)

I LOVE THIS.

Oh my gosh, them being each others' reference point, and the way you've woven that into the story is just beautifully done. <333 The rhythm of the text is really excellent too.

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